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first comic: kei and suzu(marmalade boy) fanficomi

Tue Nov 15, 2005, 12:06 PM
okay. so this will be the basic story.
Scene 1: Kyoto Academy

its 3:00 and Kei's last class has just ended. It was a pretty hard day for him. He recieved a C+ on his English midterm, his mom forgot to pack him a drink for lunch, and 20$ was stolen from his wallet. He is just about ready to go home. As soon as he opens the front doors of the school he sees none other than Suzu's smiling face beaming at him. "Hiiii Kei!" she excalims with great enthusiasm. Kei rolls his eyes and walks away. Suzu makes a "?" face and follows him anyways. She then begins to bombard him with questions. "So how was school todaY? Did you do well on your midterm? Aren't you hungry? I sure am, Let's go out to eat!" she excalims. Kei looks at her and rolls his eyes. "aHhh leave me alone!" he screams and runs away as fast as possible. Suzu looks at him and smiles. "I guess i'll call him tonight. He'll probably feel better than."

Scene 2: Kei's House

Kei walks in to see an upset sister glaring at him. "Do you know what time it is Kei?" she asks him. Kei shrugs. "I dont care." Kei's mother makes a disgusted face at him. "Don't you DARE take a nap. I will be up in exactly 5 minutes and i f i dont see you hitting those books, i'll HIT YOU!" she shrieks after him. "Fuck you!" Kei screams as he runs up to his room and slams the door. Kei falls on his bed with his arms crossed and shuts his eyes. He imagines being in a better place. with Miki, his love. They both are lying down in a beautiful field of grass. "I love you, Miki" Kei says to her, "I love you too, Kei" Miki says. They both look into each others eyes and just as they are about to kiss, Kei wakes up from the sound of his cell phone ringing. He groans loudly and picks it up. "HELLO!?!?!?!" he shrieks into it. (we can see the veins of his neck popping). "helloooo" says a soft voice. Kei rollls his eyes. "What?!?!" he asks. "What are you doing right now?" Suzu asks him. "None of your business!" Kei shrieks. "Well, anyways i'm in front of your house, do you want to go out for a minute?" Suzu asks. Kei slams the phone down and pulls a pillow over his head.

Scene 3: Outside

Suzu waits patiently outisde for Kei. For the whole damn night.

Scene 4: Next day morning

Kei wakes up brushes his teeth, takes his book bag and is ready to leave when he finds that suzu is outside his apartment sleeping with her head between her knees. Kei rolls his eyes as he passes Suzu. As he passes, she awakens and rushes over to Kei. "Kei, Kei! are you alright? What happened last night? We were supposed to meet!" Kei looks at Suzu and laughs. "Do you actually THINK i'm your friend? Why do you keep on talking to me? Please just go away. You are such a bother. I wish you would just find someone else to talk to. Don't you have any friends? why don't you just get a life like everybody else in the world?" Kei says out of sheer anger and aggravance. (i dont know is that a word if it aint, shat up!"Suzu looks at him obviously hurt. Her eyes go down, her face darkens and she becomes bright red. Kei angrilly leaves a sad Suzu behind. She begins to silently cry. "ungrateful asshole." she says under her breath. Kei walks halfway to school until he realizes what he has done.

To be continued. i actually have to draw it now!

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